To review the process of this project I’m doing, head to this link to read my first instalment.
Here’s the poem that resulted from the first go:
Time
Shallowly breathed in
And in a cup held with practiced hands
The teachings precious and thin
This time what I did for the next set of lines to be collected, was just half the numbers for choosing the shelf, page, book, paragraph and line. Here’s the result:
- …will be favourable or as an expectation that it will not be unfavourable…
- …gone off voluntarily leaving money…
- …to the kingdom in a particular area. Consequently, we…
- …Would probably have difficulty in getting down on the floor and up again…
- …or the fat bottom of the former sea.
Then, because I had more time to spend, I enlisted the help of Jay, sound man…ticket taker, door holder, and all around nice guy, to do some category picking for me. Here are the categories…
- Poetry, Sci-Fi, Literary Fiction, Plays, Biography
…and the result from Jay’s picked numbers is:
- …itself is not too high a price to pay for the pleasure of hearing…
- …stacked almost to the ceiling.
- …that simply had to go.
- …only he could hear. But it was too late. The ranchers
- …nod from the studio that held no authority
And then the half number results:
- …loneliness – before death – all individuals are united:…
- …just under the surface of polite intercourse.
- …who, after trying to marry him herself, was now…
- …available to go out with her that night, or any other night.
- and if so, how much would all of this cost?
So, as I suspected, the first go at the song has changed with the addition of all these new lines. With a little mind bending, here’s the result for this phase. I should mention that before starting this project, I had a piece of music that I had come up with that I wanted to put lyrics to. I think that has helped, allowing me to arrange phrases to a cadence already established, helping to form a song…poetry based, as opposed to a poem. I’ve got a working title too, here you go:
Some Kingdom’s Door
In a cup held with practiced hands
Both precious and thin
Fragrance rising to the ceiling
Too shallowly breathed in
Is there a high price to pay
If you just have to go
I could hear “Well, I don’t think so
Just so you know”
And this night’s just like any other
With my feet on the floor
Tapping at the bottom
Of some kingdom’s door
Marcel Desilets
June 4, 2011